that was in 2016 = back in 2016 (more fluent)
it's really inspire = it really inspires // is and inspire are both verbs, we can only have one at a time
than any feeling = than any other feeling (if you're comparing one feeling to another, and if not - leave it as it was)
that starts = started (we're talking about things that happened already, so past simple should be here)
smiled to me = smiled at me (smile to is not grammatically incorrect, but it's not used a lot)
they're remember me = they've remembered (all of the memories and experiences are usually the perfect tense things) + are and remember both verbs, big nono
there is no (не будет больше никогда такого же чудесного) = there isn't going to be anything as magical as what happened
we're didn't talk = are is present simple, didn't talk is past simple. you've already met, so correct would be we didn't talk
all time = all the time
she's (легка на подъём) = she's easy-going / spontaneous
we're just walked = we just walked
most importantly, (чувствовала себя самой собой) - I felt like myself
I mean when there is no one is around to help me with this thing. - two "is", drop the second one = I mean when there is no one around to help me with this thing.
? also, I'm glad to hear that your trip to Moscow was that good. seriously. and feeling like yourself WITH yourself - is one of the most important things in the world. so keep up the good work, you can achieve that! I believe in you with all my heart
itsy-bitsy things that need to be changed:
*on Beon - we use the preposition "on" before websites, eg - on Twitter, on VK, on Instagram, on Facebook, etc
*taught me - thought is about thinking; taught is about learning new things
*at any cost - coast is the shore, the edge of earth before water (lake or sea, or ocean) starts; cost is the price
*relates with Beon has OR related with Beon had - we need to be more specific with time here, babe, if it doesn't affect you anymore - it'll be -ed + had, if it still affects you a bit - -s + has
*with two sides - a/an articles before plural things are a big no-no
*категорична - definitive (it also could mean final, like there's no going back)
(great train of thought, bb, and, well, we always have the ability to change something for the better when we want to, make this - your change ?)
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